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Reviewer: jlgg Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14 2016 07:02 am Title: Part 1

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Reviewer: TrinityScar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18 2010 12:29 am Title: Part 2

I was wondering when this would come over here.
It's very real-life-y which is a horrible way to describe something, but bear with me. It's not the over done fairy tale ending in which Jan ends up with Juri after he saves the day (or one of the rowers) after a catastrophic event of some sort. Rather he realizes that what he has is good for him and he doesn't need to kill himself trying to get something he can't have. This is something that may not happen as often as it should but happens more often than the fairy tale ending.
The Juri/Timo relationship threw me a little. Mostly why Timo is at the team's camp in the first place if he has no intention of ever joining. It's not like Jan needs the company; he has plenty of friends on the team.
I also wonder if Jan and Fabi stayed friends. I imagine it would be fairly awkward and it's not hugely important to the story line either way. I'm just curious.
And why did the other school just stay in their boat house and essentially merge with their team? Aren't they supposed to have a deep-seated instinctual hatred for each other?
I'll be the first to admit that I know nothing about rowing. I can't even name the closest lake to me. It is my guess however that you are a rower; the amount of detail in the story screams first-hand experience.
That's just what I came away with. This is an amazing read. :D

Author's Response: You're right: there's a lot missing that could have been included but when it came down to the editing, I thought it better to let the more tangential stuff slide to keep the focus on Jan and Mäx, and have the story come full circle to Jo showing up at David's doorstep. To answer your questions: 1)Timo/Juri starts at a campout, a one or two day event, not at the rowing camp, and it has a lot more to do with Jan's personality than any interest in rowing on Timo's part. Jan's shy, he was worried about being semi-alone with Frank, and he wanted Timo there to reassure him, not realizing that he'd end up too distracted by Frank to really need Timo with him. 2) Oh, yeah, they stay friends in that sort of see each other every once in a while way. There was a part I left out where Jan runs into Fabi a couple years later at a race. Fabi hasn't hit his growth spurt yet so he's still a coxswain. 3) Tensions died down and it would have been too distracting to keep the problems with Margaux as part of the story. I'm glad you liked it. My stories tend to focus more on internal and interpersonal struggles, though this is the first sportsfic I've done.

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