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Date: Nov 15 2016 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Scorpia Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12 2009 12:08 am Title: Chapter 4 epilogue

I usually don't like fiction where one/all of the band members are creatures and have special powers and stuff, but really, I liked this one. Sweet, sexy and... yeah, a good plot. :-)

Author's Response:

that none of them are superhuman may have helped.  All of them have weaknesses that got soundly explioted.. the superpowers that make verything right without thinking ot work makes me twitch.. so I tried to avoid that pitfall

 

Thank you for givine it a chance and thank you again for a kind review :)

Reviewer: JustMelissa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15 2009 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 4 epilogue

All ends well, thankfully! You had me on the edge of my seat with this wonderful story the whole time through! Loved it!! :D

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it.. there will be more bits as those muses bite..

Reviewer: alphaville Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 13 2009 11:58 am Title: Chapter 4 epilogue

no it can't be over yet! blast it all. loved the story hope that you do write little tidbits from this universe. can i request more insight into franky and linke's relationship? i think we got mostly jan and juri's relationship growth in this story. not that i didn't love that or anything. anyway, great job keep writing.

Author's Response: there are some bits for Linke and Franky planned.. I have a cute little smutlet that'll go up Monday or Teusday if thins go well..

Reviewer: Diglossia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10 2009 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'll be revisiting the universe but it'll be shorter one shots.

Please do. I'd love to see Juri introduce Jan to his family. Hey, Ma, I got someone I want you to meet.

Jan could totally hide behind Juri and just pop out all ta da, I'm an elf, too. It would be the only time where dating a fucking magical creature might be less startling than dating someone of your own gender.

I would like to see why Franky abandoned the magical world and more cuddling of the three pairs all around. Linke could accidentally turn drake on Franky in the middle of canoodling and shit...

Anyway, wonderful again.

Author's Response: I have an idea for Linke freaking out a new tech by goign all scaly and jumping out goign bogga bogga at him...  the others.. yeah... in line for later

Reviewer: Diglossia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10 2009 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 4 epilogue

Adorably wonderful. I like how you pieced it together to bring them back into their band lives. You wove the whole story together really well, unlike my, ahem, terribly tangential and pointless Brush with Celebrity fic. I adored it altogether and was dying to read every new installment. Erstaunlich!

Author's Response:

my Linke muse wanted to go home and cuddle his Franky so he basically took my outline and tore it apart and re-did it to suit himself...

 

I'll be revisiting the universe but it'll be shorter one shots.

Reviewer: Diglossia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19 2009 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

I adore this story. I really do hope this is more. And you're obviously well-read on elves (not many people have heard of iron poisoning, I'm sure) and creative enough to spin the basics on their head. Love it and can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

I'm a geek, and have a large and rather diverse family so I got bedtime tales dealing with several variations of elf-kin from the British variant that Jan is based on that's hellishly sensitive to iron to the more Scandanavian varient that I used for Juri who is more resistant... *shrugs* and I read more than many folks think is healthy *wry grin*

 

glad you're enjoying it, thre will be more now that I'm past the sticky bridge

Reviewer: alphaville Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19 2009 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 2

now that i've read it... awesome, beautiful, amazing. i'm glad the guys are okay, and so cute jan/juri in there. can't wait for the rest. sorry i'm so incoherent today

Author's Response:

still waiting on Franky to check in.. and Linke to get loose... and you're being very coherent on one point, and I'm glad you liked it..

 

There will be more and sooner than the month and half wait for this section

Reviewer: alphaville Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19 2009 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

yay more! i'm so happy to see this. now i'll go read it

Author's Response:

now that the sticky has been dealt withthere will be more a bit quicker.. a few weeks over the couple months for this update..

 

thank you for your patience.

Reviewer: angelshadows Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19 2009 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 2

oh wow!! this is so good. man i wish their was another chapter. but you did an amazing job! so glad you updated!

Author's Response:

now that I got around the problem at the start of section five the rest should be a lot easier to get out... I have a few more paragraphs on section seven for LJ posting (tryng to get three then post them as a lump in the archive) hopefully by the start of next month I'll have another big chunk for here.

next bit Linke gets a familiar, wether he wanted one or not :P

Reviewer: Diglossia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 16 2009 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1

I didn't think I'd like it but I definitely did. Loved the Skeeter/Rowlings joke. More?

Author's Response: This is my problem child.. I have two chapter to it but a HUGE gap to get around to get to those chapters... It's being worked on but not as fast as I'd like..

Reviewer: alphaville Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 04 2009 01:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay! Sadness that's the more is on your LJ. I don't have one of those, and last I checked yours was f-locked. I am super excited to hear that you're working on getting more out for us.

Author's Response:

LJ is free.. so you could get a journal and just never post in it... I have a couple folks who have friended me who don't really post to thier own journals. and mine is F-locked bacuase of all the adult materials on it... all writing so far, but I haven't had time to try and sketch...

There will be more, I am still writing just not as much as I'd like on That fic..

Reviewer: alphaville Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 03 2009 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

okay so i know you probably won't see this, but i'm not about begging at this point. more, please, more? pretty pretty pretty please more? i'm giving the puppy dog stare, which believe me is hard for me to give. i always come off as a slightly deranged puppy dog, but i'm trying. please?

Author's Response:

I'm stalled at getting the boys kidnapped... once that issue gets resolved the next sections will go up fairly quickly... I think I have another short bit up on my LJ that isn't here, but that's all thats "public"

 

It's getting worked on, and hasn't been forgotten I promise...

Reviewer: jadedhavok Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03 2008 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

*giggles*

So anything Harry Potter is totally okay in my book (though I'm a Drarry fan myself, I suppose I can stomach the Snarry if I have to).

I like this. Cranky!Vampric!Linke is always a win, David as a veela is hilarious (I keep imagining him as a birdman), and I love little elf!Jan. :):)

Author's Response: Now that I've mostly gotten my Advent ficcing done I can get back to it.. I have a need to put Timo pouncing a sunning Davii with wings scene somewhere... Glad you like it.

Reviewer: prettyfaces Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28 2008 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

*drool* umm i love it!! i really do and i hope to see more from you soon

Author's Response: Should be more up in a week or so... thank you :)

Reviewer: Questionsannoyme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 27 2008 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

>) This made me laugh evilly

Author's Response: should I be concerned? I'm already plotting things that have my Linkemuse plotting to reformat my computer :)

Reviewer: alphaville Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26 2008 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

cool. can't wait for more, and I'm not complaining that they're all magical creatures. the more the merrier! =^.^=

Author's Response: like I said was pure laziness on my part... rnrnrnbut Jan makes a really cute elf...

Reviewer: angelshadows Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26 2008 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow!!! this is story is great!!!

Author's Response: Thank you :) some time next week there should be another (shorter) bit.

Reviewer: alphaville Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26 2008 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Howdy! I just wanted to encourage you to write/post more of this. The concept is intriguing. I would have advised drawing it out a bit more so that the reader isn't bombarded with such a large amount of information so quickly. And the idea that all the guys are magical creatures/mated to one another is very farfetched, but I'm a complete sucker for magical creature fics. Other than being rushed I loved this. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Part of the speed of the first section was the durn fic wouldn't let me alone... another bit was the drop the characters in it and run. Having all of them be magic was easier than some of them, so that's pure laziness on my part. And Franky isn't mated to Linke, at least not yet. Jan and Juri are only just in the preliminary stages... There is a slow down and let things settle before they get dropped in it again... Thank you for the comments

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